I once had a dream were I was in this mysterious place . There were tigers,birds,and elephants. I remember going into a dark room and thinking what is this place . The dark room was like something from a hunted house show you would see on tv. Everything was dark except for a tiny candel that lit up about a fourth of the room . I was scared terrified and shakend . I looked around to see nothing it was too dark.Someone else was in there a little girl about 5 yr. Old. I turned around to greet her she didn’t seem to wanna talk so I asked her whats wrong she said “Theres a tiger its scary.” She pointed to a corner . I grabbed her by the arm and pulled her to the door . I jumped when the tiger was blocking our escape.
Reader Comments
100 WC #11
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Good job on your 100 word challenge. What happen after you jumped?
Dear Itzza,
I like the way you used many details to describe the setting and made it seem very creepy and scary.
Great job itzza I love all the descriptions while reading this I was so into it ,it was like reading a book keep up the good work !!!!
What happened? Did the dream stop when you jumped back?
Great story Itzza!
Hi Itzza, I enjoyed your post about the tigers and felt that you added many details that made the setting of the story thrilling! Good Job, keep up the good work!